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You Are Mine

September 14, 2013
By jessdodd95 BRONZE, Coventry, Other
jessdodd95 BRONZE, Coventry, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Practice makes Perfect


When you lose yourself one day
And you don't know where to go
Reach for my hand, I'll show you the way
Never let go, don't you know

CHORUS
You should never run and hide
I promise you, you will be fine
I am fighting by your side
Why? Because you are mine

Don't be scared, nothing to fear
Whenever we are apart
It's okay to shed a tear
I'm here, inside your heart

CHORUS

No need to be in such despair
I promise to not go anywhere
I promise you I'm here to stay
Wouldn't have it any other way


The author's comments:
This song was inspired by my ex who couldn't be honest with their parents about us going out. I wrote this to say I would always be there for them.

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daftdavid123 said...
on Jun. 6 2014 at 10:15 am
Hey jessdodd95. Your song has some very strong emotuon behind it. I can see what rubyjade94xox is saying but I think it is alright as it is. As you write more somgs you will learm to take more risks and such. Hope you enjoy writing songs mate :)

on Jan. 5 2014 at 12:15 pm
This song is quite good, but its a bit too rigidly structured. The emotion behind the song is extrmely powerful, so it must have meant a lot to you when you wrote it, but it follows too similiat structure. Be a bit more creative! Believe in yourself more, your a talented song writer xx