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Behind Closed Doors

April 26, 2013
By Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.


Behind closed doors,
There's a nervous heart,
There's a child in need,
There are wounds and scars.

Behind closed doors,
Many tears are shed,
Many broken lives,
Many ones are dead.

All...
Unknown...


The author's comments:
Chorus from a song I'm working on

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on May. 1 2013 at 8:05 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I like this, it really makes sense that you are planning to turn this into a song, that's a brilliant idea. I like the title, it's great. The rhythm in here is terrific! I think that it will really be special once it's extended and turned into a song. From what you have right now, this is going to be great, not that it isn't already, because right now it's spectacular. I like the story(s) in here, it/they are strong and powerful. It can be many different stories. You leave it open for the reader to relate to many different things. Good word choices. GREAT job.