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March 2, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

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To touch a soul and bring in me the pain,
The misery to watch and try to call out,
The webs of the darkness encircle me snapping and lashing out for blood,
Thier murderous eyes gleaming for fun,
As I try to reach where I once started,
But how can you go back from a place that seems far away,
Unwind the veil your set in your eyes,
Set your heart free with the melody of my love,
Fly away into the cave of your thoughts.
Oh open the veil into yesterday and unleash the monster hiding at bay,
Open your eyes and open your heart and bring back the light thats been shut away.
Or shut yourself away once again.

© Sindha A., Champaign, IL

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This is what happens when i listen to music and think of life you get sweet sad song lyrics hope you like them
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AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2015 at 2:41 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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&quot;Our passion is our strength.&quot; <br /> -Billie Joe Armstrong

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Wonderful job!
Under-the-Rain GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 5:29 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Once again you have amazed me.  This is perfect and my favorite line is, "Oh open the veil into yesterday."
AmorMoritur PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2013 at 4:07 pm
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this is REALLY good...amazing meaning
ShyRhea SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 7:54 pm
ShyRhea SILVER, Cordell, Oklahoma
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Really cool I love it
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 7:52 pm
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hey i made a skype.... add me dmanhope
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 8:31 pm
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it seems like your thoughts are shrouded and you can relay them freely. like i said before you word choice is excellent, but the overall is like a 6.9 out of ten. if you just tweaked you work, and spent just a little more time, you will get published, no doubt. I suggest read more poetry and find the way some of your fav poems and poets flow to help develop a natural un-clouded style
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:41 pm
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*soul               
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:40 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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I love all of your poems/song lyrics and you always end them exceptionally well, tying together the whole piece. This a beautiful haunting piece that touches the heart and sould
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:32 pm
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Absolutley Beautiful!! Nothing to change! :P
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:31 pm
HopethroughFaithInGod BRONZE, Perry, Michigan
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It is very good! YES
WhiteSwan13 SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:24 pm
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
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I LOVE IT!!!! :)
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 25 2013 at 8:31 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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I think its perfect, i specially loved "open the veil into yesterday", awesome work!
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:43 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Thanks guys, do you think there's anything i should change to make it better?
Ray--yo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:41 pm
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)<br /> &quot;I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.&quot; -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

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that was beautiful!
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 6:14 pm
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Beautiful, I love it!