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Such an Angel MAG

November 4, 2012
By LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
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She's fighting in the hospital bed
Her hair's gone now, just a vacant head
“Don't cry for me” are her words
Her voice as gentle as a bird's
Never seen a girl so beautiful
Never seen such an angel
She belongs in heaven with the others
Tears slide down the face of her brothers
She's the only one that doesn't cry
How can she accept that she might die?
The color is gone from her pretty face,
But the fire lives in her
Eating away, eating away
Shining through her eyes.
Why does cancer choose the innocent?
Why her? Why not me?
She's gonna sprout wings, fly away
Back to heaven where she should be.
Never seen a girl so powerful
Never seen such an angel.
She held up her white flags, white flags
It's not surrender if the battle isn't fair.
She was fighting, but the fight wasn't enough.
God was calling and it must have been tough.
With the words,
I love you, Mom
I love you, Dad
I love you, everyone I ever had
In the grasp of my little hands, I made you whole
I made you whole
But now I'm going home
With the close of her eyes
She left her spirit, soul, and mind
Never knew a girl so wonderful
Never knew such an angel.



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on Oct. 3 2014 at 1:37 am
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
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Thanks so much! Haven't been on in a very long time as you can see lol

on Oct. 3 2014 at 1:36 am
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 17 comments
2 years later, but thank you!

on Oct. 3 2014 at 1:36 am
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 17 comments
Apparently I haven't been on in a while.. thank you!

on Nov. 21 2013 at 3:37 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

OMG! that is so good im inspired to go day to day now thank you and it was so beautifully written

on Nov. 28 2012 at 7:34 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

WOW!!!!! so beautiful! am impressed

on Nov. 12 2012 at 10:57 pm
LoveLiv46 SILVER, Cowiche, Washington
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Thank you so much. :) I really enjoy your lyrics entitled "Plus More"

on Nov. 12 2012 at 10:55 pm
that was  so amazing and creative touching it was just beautiful and i rllly think your an amazing writer;) 

on Nov. 12 2012 at 6:58 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

WOW, this is beautiful. Very insightful, and touching. You're a great writer!!