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Crashing Down
May 25, 2011
I walk in the room and my vision blurs. A red tint consumes everything and it seems as if teh walls are burning.
Chorus:
The walls are crashing down, tumbling to the ground, burning all around me. Flashes of yellow, orange, and red. So hot I feel I am ash now.
The walls are closing in turning the room into a cage too small for any animal, let alone a human being. My lungs are bieng deprivd of air and instead filled with smoke.
Chorus
My heart explodes from my chest. Thats what it feels like when the walls of your life come crashing down on you.
Crashing down.
Crashing down.
Burning to the ground.
Thats what it feels like when your walls come crashing down.
© Brianna D., Everson, WA
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This article has 6 comments.
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 4:45 pm
thank you i showed it to my friedns one day in a notebook and she told me it sounded more like a song tahn a poem so i entered it that way otherwise it would be a poem right now
CieraDesiree GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 2:53 pm
Nice=)) I like it.
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:10 pm
thank you. sorry bout the typo in the first verse i cant type very well.
Scribbler-of-Dreams PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 8:50 pm
Stong...very strong.
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers
I like this and I'd love to hear the music to it someday! Great work!
Check out my stuff sometime please?