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Drifting Away

September 13, 2010
By starxoxo23 PLATINUM, New Hampshire, New Hampshire
starxoxo23 PLATINUM, New Hampshire, New Hampshire
21 articles 0 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The creative is the place where no one else has ever been. You have to leave the city of your comfort and go into the wilderness of your intuition. What you'll discover will be wonderful. What you'll discover is yourself."
- Alan Alda


Keep quiet, act composed, and you might just drift away
Drift into the city streets, the baby blue skies, the hard rock beat
Where no one knows you, nothing matters anymore
It's called the bliss of drifting away, of being unseen
Slipping slowly down deeper, deeper, deeper 'til you're underground
With the soft soil that stifles and suffocates and nurtures your soul
Let yourself go, and simply drift away



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on Oct. 2 2010 at 4:11 pm
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

I don't fully grasp what this is about, but I think that's part of the allure. Good job. Keep writing!

on Sep. 28 2010 at 6:06 pm
starxoxo23 PLATINUM, New Hampshire, New Hampshire
21 articles 0 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The creative is the place where no one else has ever been. You have to leave the city of your comfort and go into the wilderness of your intuition. What you'll discover will be wonderful. What you'll discover is yourself."
- Alan Alda

thanks soooo much (: feedback like this really means alot to me. i will definitely keep writing!

on Sep. 28 2010 at 12:43 pm
In_Love_Loved PLATINUM, Concord, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"I've lost my faith in so many things but I still believe in you." -Sanctus Real

Wow, this is really...kinda, haunting. I have looked over some of your other writings and I think you write beautifully - easy to understand, somewhat sad, but with talents. Keep writing!!!!