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Monster

September 9, 2010
By IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
19 articles 9 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Moshimo anata kanarazu no naka de ai... ai to issho ni anata no kokoro soshite tamashii."

(translation: If you fall in love.... Love with your heart and soul.)


Wilted rose petals on the pillow
Stained with faded tears
Ink scribbled on the lined pages
Obeying the hand that thinks the Words
Rain pattering on the window sill
Seems like the skys' been crying a Lot
Since you left
Everything is gray
The people in the streets are idle Shadows with unbrellas
Their faces blurred by the rain
And their own tears
But inside
The house is cold and quiet
That piano still sits in the study We hardly went in
I play it sometimes
Open the windows and let the sad Melody drift away in the cold, wet Outdoors
I wake up in the middle of the Night
I dream about you still
But you aren't there to hug me
To chase the monsters away
Heh
Guess that'd be a little hard now
Seeing as the monster
Is you
So I stand on the top of the stairs
In my bare feet
The wood floor is hard and cold
Like the monster that wakes me up
I stare down the dark hall
Hoping to see the door open
Hoping that monster will walk in
Shed his skin
And pull me into his arms once Again
But the door remains closed
All through the night
So I sit on the stairs
As the sky and I
Continue to cry


The author's comments:
This was originally going to be sort of a deeply romantic kind of poem but somewhere in there I just started feeling sad. I guess thats what I get for writing while listening to classical music.

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IansLover GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2010 at 6:14 pm
IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
19 articles 9 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Moshimo anata kanarazu no naka de ai... ai to issho ni anata no kokoro soshite tamashii."

(translation: If you fall in love.... Love with your heart and soul.)

Aw, thanks so much! :)

on Sep. 26 2010 at 4:20 pm
taylor.nichole SILVER, Bakersfield, California
9 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I restore myself when I'm alone -Maralin Monroe
iv'e always been misrepresented. You know, I could dress in a clown costume and laugh with the happy people but they'd still say i'm a dark personality. - Tim Burton

i realy like this..and some other work of yours. your talented:)

IansLover GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2010 at 7:12 pm
IansLover GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
19 articles 9 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Moshimo anata kanarazu no naka de ai... ai to issho ni anata no kokoro soshite tamashii."

(translation: If you fall in love.... Love with your heart and soul.)

Thanks! I've come to realize that the most realistic stories are usually sad...

on Sep. 23 2010 at 4:51 pm
Crazy-for-you SILVER, Ellicott City, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When I first fell for you, I used to think that building up this invisible wall was a waste of time... but after time of thinking about it, I think it wasn't a waste because now I know who can break through."

wow, i really like this story. its sad but i like the way it tells a story.