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July 31, 2010
By Friggi PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
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Friggi PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
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Giving up is not weakness it means you are strong and brave enough to let it all go

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your arms suround me they protect me they hold me safe and strong
Your lips they caress me they kiss me and love me dear
your eyes peer into me and see my deep soul
your heart makes me whole

My arms long to hold you and they reach when your not near
My lips long for yours and await each tender kiss
My eyes dont see your flaws thy see your perfection I see your problems but I see they make you whole

My heart loves you dearly and never will let you go

our hearts and our existence makes eachother whole again

© Liza M., Vineland, NJ

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friends, family and my boyfriend make me who i am
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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 3:49 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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That would be wonderful.
Friggi PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 8:13 am
Friggi PLATINUM, Manassas, Virginia
40 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up is not weakness it means you are strong and brave enough to let it all go

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thank you i am very glad when i get feedback. the poem is about love and friendship and the comfort of knowing they are allways there.

i will ead some of your work and give you some feedback if you want

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 7:46 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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This poem is very well written and comforting. It says a lot about the warmth and dependence of love.