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Dance with me

April 30, 2010
By Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror


The day I saw u with her
Was the day I knew u weren’t mine
That was the last time I talked to
And the last u crossed my mind
Until the night u walked up to me
and said Will u dance me
It won’t me a thing
She ain’t here And you are
SO will u dance with me
pretty pretty please
Now when u see me in the hall
U look at me and smile
When ur talking to her
U still look straight at me
And it all happened when u said
Will you dance with me
It won’t mean a thing
She ain’t here and you are
So will u dance with me
Pretty pretty Please
Just dance with me


The author's comments:
its not finished but its a start

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 7:16 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

I bet u could rite way better than me

on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:30 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
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"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

i thinks its good.  I think its better than anything i could ever write

on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:24 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

Thanks alot i didn't think it was good

on Jun. 4 2010 at 8:47 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

Wow this is beautiful

on May. 21 2010 at 1:09 pm
Kay-Kay96 BRONZE, Blacksburg, South Carolina
3 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
A broken heart is a broken mirror

I didn't think this was even good enough for this site but i guess its is refering to my friend  STILL LOVE U