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Ocean Moon Sky

March 11, 2010
By AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

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Bitter freezing wind
Makes me wonder when
It will all come together
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky
Makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky 2x
As you walk in the wind
It shines it's mysterious glow on you
Ocean moon sky
makes me wonder why
Ocean moon sky
Dark sky above
My first true love
The moon is dancing in an ocean
Ocean moon sky 2x

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

The author's comments:
I wrote this song in December on a night where the sky looked like an ocean, and the moon sparkled in it and I was just feeling moody alright!;) <3
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AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 15 2010 at 10:56 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

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"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

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thank you!:)
Sultana GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 10:21 pm
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
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This is simply loooovely.

I loved the eclectic choice in words, like you can't take it all in at one time, as if emotions and facts are rushing in at you at the same time...

AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2010 at 8:36 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

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"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

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yea it is, I play it on my guitar:)thanks a lot!:)
_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2010 at 8:29 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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Is this a song? It's really good! Nice job!
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:18 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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thanks so much!:)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
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HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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love it:))) it had good imagery
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM said...
on May. 2 2010 at 1:26 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
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Awww thanks so much!!! I wish you could too, but hey we're working on that!:)
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM said...
on May. 2 2010 at 1:17 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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Argh! I wish I could hear the music!!! And I love your metaphors!!!