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Star Catching

February 5, 2010
By OneBarProductions PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
OneBarProductions PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
33 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You think it is the living that will have the ultimate judgement over you, but it's the dead that will have no claim over your soul"


What if I could grab a star?
And bring it to my view

I use to think you were a million times one
but now you're in my hands
your glow
it seems
as though the others are now none

I'm on a Journey to catching stars
from moons and planets way afar
I someday wish I'll own a bag of dreams
cause satching stars is never as it seems

What if I could claim my own planet? and create a small colony
and let the stars
smile and kneel right before my feet
I'm on a journey to catching stars
from moons and planets way afar
I someday wish I'll own a bag of dreams
cause catcing stars is never as it seems

I've had just about enough
my sweet filled dream turned to star dust
I'll lie awake and wish to sleep
so I can jump planet to planet in a single leap



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on Feb. 15 2011 at 9:27 am
OneBarProductions PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
33 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You think it is the living that will have the ultimate judgement over you, but it's the dead that will have no claim over your soul"

In my writings I try NOT to be all happy/sappy with things. I try and get RIGHT to the point and hopefully along the way people enjoy it and continue to read my stuff. I appreciate the comments guys :)

If you want to pick a lil more at my brain I have a book on here thats close to only 1/4 of the ways done...I think ya'll would like it! High Schooler Ricky Steele: Freshman

thats the title. give it a whirl.


eglantine GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:23 pm
eglantine GOLD, Huntsville, Alabama
18 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
a robe. you know... a backwards snuggie.

I really like this! It's so fresh and sweet. You put a smile on my face. Would you tell me about the way it sounds?

i_am_ivy said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 1:15 pm
Beautiful! Took me on a star catching journey, you did. :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 9:24 pm
I really like this o ne..haha, normally I wouldn't find this kind of stuff appealing, but it was pretty good :D