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Dark Nights

December 16, 2009
By Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)


Dark Nights



come almost every night…
Glowing moon



Shining stars



to make a wish



might leave a scar

But how could I ask for more
on a dark night like this?
Stalking trees


and sparkling lake




to take a swim





would make me shake

Howling wolves


and fading fears


how much calm can there be here?
Out on a dark night like this love and hate



with peace and war

they’re not even here any more
Nights this dark wear on and on through even the break of dawn
The world grows quiet


and all is well


on these dark nights

I lose myself




Dark nights



may come almost every night…

The author's comments:
This was inspire might those night skys that take you breath away. And those rainy nights and the air is just...perfect.

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on May. 7 2010 at 5:58 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

I love the poem,so much..............

on Mar. 5 2010 at 2:31 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Lol I understand completely about the typing thing... I do the same sometimes :) And I know what you mean, about the writing- cool.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:13 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
76 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

sorry tybe-o that crazy word is "amgic" is "magic" sometimes I tbye too fast for my own good :)

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:11 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
76 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

Thank you! The reason it end like that in a sort of drifting off way is just beacsue there are so many other things I could say about Dark Nights and in drifting off like it does it just like saying that the amgic never ends,... thats why I did it.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:21 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I really like this poem and the meaning\ feelings behind it. The end does leave it open more than i'd prefer- but it's not my style, it's yours :) This is really good and visual.