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Choice

November 1, 2009
By niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret."


decisions, decisions
heads colliding caused a collision
nevr deciding thr right road
and a whole boat load
load of thoughts that collide
tearing me apart and into my mind
between the truth and you
i guess i will never have a dream come true?


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on Feb. 17 2010 at 1:27 pm
I really enjoyed your thoughts. One thing I love about reading poetry is looking beyond the words and seeing what they mean to you. I can relate to your thoughts and words. NICE JOB!

on Nov. 26 2009 at 9:27 pm
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret."

thanxx for everybody reading this poem

on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:38 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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wow................................................. =] lol

on Nov. 24 2009 at 1:36 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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ya i know its really weird lol

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:42 pm
I don't really get how their comment wasn't positive either.....

Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:41 pm
It is very nice!!! I really like it!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 2:55 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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ya i dont get that how was that comment negative????

on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:38 am
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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I don't understand what you mean? how isn't it positive?

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:28 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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Great poem, short but extremely breath-taking, keep up the good writing =]