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You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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on Jun. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
kjoiner11 SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

hey this is really good could you look at my work and give me feed back id really like to u to comment cuz it sounds like you know what ur doing... everyone can look i cant feed back good or bad... thanks everyone

on Jun. 4 2010 at 10:47 am
kjoiner11 SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. you are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. but the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. i'll always be with you.”

hey this is really good read my articles and tell me what you think it sounds like you know what your doing everyone can read my stuff i want feeed back!!!! thanks

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:54 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love.&quot; <br /> &quot;Oh yeah? Why then?&quot; <br /> &quot;Because, it&#039;s the closest thing we have to magic.&quot;

i like it. i like it a lot. :)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 8:06 pm
MusingAlone BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Wow that is truely just an amazing song!

 


Snow_White said...
on May. 31 2010 at 1:36 pm
omg this song like blew me away..i even sang it out loud and it sounded just...amazing! good job! :)

on May. 13 2010 at 9:50 pm
smiley10507 PLATINUM, Fairview Heights, Illinois
22 articles 5 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t put off &#039;til tomorrow what you can do today for today is yesterday&#039;s tomorrow.&quot;

plain amazing! for this to be your first song, you did a really good job

on May. 13 2010 at 6:45 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.&rdquo;

WOW! Absolutely AMAZING! I would be honored if you looked at my poems and rated them and told me wat you think! =D

on May. 13 2010 at 6:01 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
30 articles 0 photos 75 comments
You have SERIOUS TALENT! u could totally sell these r something. plz! write more.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 5:40 pm
Wannabewriter BRONZE, Kingston, Other
3 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
TONS OF FUN!

Wow! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! If that's only your first song, than write MORE because I think you could totally get into business! ;) :P  :D

on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:23 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s not about success; it&#039;s about significance.<br /> <br /> No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

I'm going to tell exactly how moving your song is right now: it was so moving that it made me cry. Seriously. I love this so much. Make sure you keep writing; it's definitely for you. :)

Echo16 SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:17 pm
Echo16 SILVER, Gainesville, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont let the life you were born into define you, but let your dreams and passions drive you to greatness.

Wow you are a song writer. That song is so powerful. I think you should put music to it and put it on youtube. Keep on writing.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:59 am
you have the makings of a songwriter! I loved it! keep writing!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 8:18 am
family_includes_I GOLD, Sciliy, Other
14 articles 12 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can only be young once, but you can always be immature&quot;

i luv it:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:52 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,&quot;Leonardo da Vinci.

I agree with J.B. Rockz, you should put it on youtube! I honsetly love the poem.(sorry bout the spelling) XD

 


on Apr. 21 2010 at 1:57 am
Lost4Ever SILVER, Patna, Other
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments
god..its so gud!!!

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:39 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a climb, but the view is great!&quot;

ok, but this is a Christian song, not a love song! :)

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:28 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
23 articles 0 photos 99 comments
aww how  cute, say yes say yes!!! that would so win me over lol. good luck on winning the girl.

J.B. Rockz! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:46 pm

I love your song and i think you should put it on youtube so other people can love it to. 

You should write more songs 


on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:08 pm
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shut Up and Live I am the most sexiest thing that happened to you and i know you know it.

yalith good luck hahah and this is a GREAT song i love it and God bless:)

Yalith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:51 am
Yalith BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is a lie; I trust hate.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;The pain of having a broken heart is not so much as to kill you, yet not so little as to let you live.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&rsquo;t realize how much you care about someone until they don&rsquo;t care about you.&quot;

i like this song. i was wondering if u'd let me put some music to it and sing it to the girl i'm trying to win