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Night's Passage

August 6, 2021
By Anonymous

Night’s passage takes me through villages of fish-hung trees.

Night’s passage takes me inside low bridges

 and under sunsets and over lights

across Dixon and Brighton and Joliet

over highways where semitrucks like birds fly away

by streetclubs and stripmalls and watchtowers,

 when time is like a classical music station

that suddenly volume-swells and startles me.

Night’s passage takes me through thoughts

 that crowd my mind like expressway traffic.

Like the traffic, my thoughts are all going places I will never know.

 Night’s passage sweeps the day out of me.

Night’s passage makes me lie flat with my shoes off

and no destination in mind,

 just motion, just motion.

Turn up the stereo—

My life’s a steering wheel

turning harder by the hour.

Press the horn.

If you can’t hurt me,

can you feel me roar?

 I am tired and I am going to sleep

and will sleep the same number of hours

as I’ve slept for my entire life

that seems ten thousand years long

till I go under stars and starwater

and dissolve into death.


The author's comments:

It is about traveling at night in the back of my parents' car. It is also a metaphor, comparing thought processes and imagination with road-travel. And night's passage is a methapor for death as well. This poem is strangely ominous and mature--sounds like it was written by somebody a hundred years older than me.


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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Aug. 28 2021 at 9:09 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

i am weirded out by my writing this now. Of the three towns I mentioned, one is imaginary, and I have never seen a fish-hung tree.

on Aug. 27 2021 at 10:01 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

good thing you werent in the drivers seat.