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old Queen

April 8, 2014
By canam18 BRONZE, Le Center, Minnesota
canam18 BRONZE, Le Center, Minnesota
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There was an old woman who frowned
She even hated having a crown
she had a boy who died
she always did cry
so every one was so so sad



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on Apr. 23 2014 at 1:01 pm
OakwoodCat GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another: &quot;What! You too? I thought I was the only one.&rdquo; <br /> ― C.S. Lewis

Good poem, but maybe try adding some stronger verbs or more descriptive adjectives to make your writing more interesting. :) Keep Writing!