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Gnats

August 10, 2010
By AmosMoses BRONZE, Stamford, Texas
AmosMoses BRONZE, Stamford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The secret of a long life is to try not to shorten it.&quot;<br /> Nobody


As I walked out on the porch,
I saw a dude with a torch.
I asked what he was doing,
He said gnats he was shooing;
Those pesky things he would scorch.


The author's comments:
This was written as a limerick sample for class. I hope people will get a laugh out of it.

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Cowgirl Deb said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 4:13 pm
I Liked it, it unique, like to hear more.

elvira said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 11:49 am
really original and unique

ur1982 said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 5:34 pm
This made me laugh! I like it!

eviegirl said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 2:38 pm
Quite original.  Would like to hear more from this poet.