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When im with you

February 28, 2010
By OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
OneChance GOLD, Westland, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥be who YOU want to be, not what OTHERS want to see. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

When im with you,
i feel alive, no more tears running from my eyes.

When im with you,
i dream so sweetly, kissing you ever so neatly.

When im with you,
i dont feel scared, my personal bodyguard always prepared.

The author's comments:
writing comes to me...enjoy

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justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 5:00 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
0 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

I'd love for it to be longer, it's so good. Keep writing. I love the ending, how you referred to him as a body gaurd.