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Unloving Love

January 23, 2010
By TheReader SILVER, Avon, Colorado
TheReader SILVER, Avon, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Go for whatever you want, even if your friends aren't backing you up. "

We loved today, that’s all I can say
I come tomorrow, you don’t say hey
I look in your eyes
Then I see all those lies
You’re making me cry

I walk away
Hearing your buddies say “Yeah!”
What I felt inside
Made me want to hide.

Now I walk by the park
I meet a guy named Mark
It starts again
Why would I say amen?

“Do you love me?”
Says he
I say, “ Yes.”
Did I really confess?

Again I’m alone
Outside in the cold
Do you really love me?
We’ll just have to see

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This article has 3 comments.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 7:18 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

i totally agree with you

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:06 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

my favorite part is "did i really confess?" this poem is sort of very simple but has so much to it, i really liked it. keep writing!

M.S.S. GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 12:24 pm
M.S.S. GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"WACKADOO!!!" "You made a funny!" "Red Seven! Red Seven!! Red Seh-ven-a!!!" "Swaaaaag!!!!" "Ratchet" "God Said No" "God Said Yes"

i'm kinda foggy on this but i'm interested to clear that fog...