Blinded | Teen Ink


June 2, 2009
By Alysa Mallorca BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
Alysa Mallorca BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
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Our eyes are blinded by clouds of gray.
Everywhere we go everywhere we stray.
Trucks and cars wind down our streets.
The grayness meets.
We believe it will go away so we sit and wait.
People strive to show and demonstrate.
But it’s as if no one takes the bait.
Someone, Somewhere, Someday
I believe there will be a way.

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on May. 27 2013 at 7:50 pm
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
'' there is nothing to fear but fear its self''

hmm very interesting poem.

on Jan. 28 2011 at 3:21 pm
TiredEternity, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
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Great poetry, so prfound yet realistic. I greatly enjoyed it!

on Jan. 11 2010 at 11:33 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

i like this its soo positive and ik for me happy poems. good job. plz check out my work too =) smile smile

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on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:46 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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I agree with dreamer_believe, this is beautiful. I like how you use bait when talking about humans.

on Sep. 13 2009 at 3:09 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) this is beatiful! the flow is amazing, and it has deep meaning. i really love this. omigoodness its great :) 5 stars, wish i could give you more than a 5! :) check out some of my work when you can and comment, i love feedback.