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Swim Race

April 23, 2017
By bri3rober SILVER, Denton, Texas
bri3rober SILVER, Denton, Texas
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The water lies still
Then my hands break the surface
My race has begun



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on Apr. 28 2017 at 7:29 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

I like the quiet-before-the-storm feeling of the first line, then the sudden, forceful action of the second