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January 21, 2009
By badlands SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
badlands SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
9 articles 1 photo 2 comments

little haiku poem
bouncing around in my head
messes up my hair.

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on Sep. 21 2015 at 12:22 pm
EdgarAllanPoe, Montrose, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.

I would have done it better after all Im Edgar Allan Poe

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2015 at 8:02 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
11 articles 0 photos 54 comments
really good! check out and give feedback to my poems please!

on Jul. 7 2014 at 11:06 pm
CynthiaFeathers ELITE, Frisco, Texas
124 articles 42 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who is bound to a star does not turn back.
Leonardo Di Vinci

You see I'm a bit of a poet, and you did not know it! What!?
~Sir Percy Blakeney

I love this poem. I've read it a million times, but I still love it.

on Jun. 13 2013 at 5:15 pm
Athena19 SILVER, Central Point, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Love people. Cook them tasty food.' -Penzey's Spices

Haha I like the imagery :)

on Mar. 23 2013 at 2:11 am
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
0 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

Cute and simple.

on Nov. 22 2012 at 7:37 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Nice! :) 

Riley79 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 12:02 am
Riley79 BRONZE, Dover, Delaware
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Music in the soul can be heard by the universe.”
-Lao Tzu

That's so cute!

Nemmers SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 9:49 am
Nemmers SILVER, Weston, Colorado
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Be an Original

This poem reaches out to me oh so much...Its fabulous! I really like it because I can relate

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:26 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments
Hilarious! The last line really turns around the whole meaning of it. Amazing!

on Nov. 14 2011 at 2:47 pm
TheWhiteFlower BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
No man can be called friendless who has God and the companionship of good books. ~Elizabeth Barrett Browning

this is so cute!!!


speedygirl13 said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:43 am
I think thats cool!

on Oct. 23 2011 at 12:41 pm
ThePhoenixRising BRONZE, Macomb, Michigan
4 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
It’s not that I’m so smart, it’s just that I stay with problems longer.
—Albert Einstein
Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results.
—Albert Einstein
I don’t know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody.
—Bill Cosby
Quidquid latine dictum sit, altum sonatur. (Whatever is said in Latin sounds profound.)
—Unknown Author
Computers are useless. They can only give you answers.
—Pablo Picasso

LOL A modern Haiku!

Simple and gets to the point. :)

Great job!

Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:53 am
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
14 articles 1 photo 118 comments
This is so quirky and simple, I love it! It's very entertaining to read.

on Aug. 18 2011 at 4:28 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 38 comments
this is totally adorable.  nice work - surprising ending

on Aug. 13 2011 at 2:15 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
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really sweet and straight forward - it made me smile with its charm!

on Jun. 16 2011 at 9:20 am
foreverme BRONZE, Williamston, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments
I love it. It made me laugh.

on Mar. 12 2011 at 3:52 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

this is a cute twist, maybe something deeper next time... but i do like it

on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:53 am
shellbi123 SILVER, East Jordan, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"don't say sorry if your not"

I PRETTY SURE THAT IT WAS 5-7-5 . lol but no biggy

on Nov. 23 2010 at 7:50 am
shellbi123 SILVER, East Jordan, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"don't say sorry if your not"

i love this!!!! haikus are one of my favorite things of poetry, KEEP WRITING:)

on Jun. 26 2010 at 4:13 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

i love this. its funny, but not stupid. great job