Golden | Teen Ink


July 2, 2014
By BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments

Golden silence of
Dawn is crushed by the peals
Of distant thunder

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on Jul. 19 2014 at 12:33 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I LOVE THIS!!! It's short yes, but your poem has POWERFUL WORDS. Your words have such FEELING and DEPTH. Keep on and please, don't give up!!! ^_^ thank for sharing this!!!

on Jul. 18 2014 at 12:07 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

you have a lot of expression in just a few words, good job^^