Broken | Teen Ink


March 7, 2014
By dreamcatcher77 BRONZE, Congers, New York
dreamcatcher77 BRONZE, Congers, New York
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change things go wrong but just remember life goes on"

Silent cries at dawn
memories that were shattered
A Broken friendship.

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on Mar. 15 2014 at 1:26 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

So short (as hiakus tend to be) but yet I can feel it. Recently cut ties with my best freind. Thank you for writing this.

on Mar. 13 2014 at 4:17 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Beautiful poem! and to an extent, relatable! Great job!

on Mar. 12 2014 at 9:44 pm
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Beautiful! The first line is especially striking.

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 5:33 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
I can really relate. I'm sorry. Beautiful, though

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 4:04 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
Very well done!