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October 9, 2013
By SammieRM PLATINUM, Urbana, Missouri
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"All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream." -Edgar Allan Poe

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Rain pitter-patters
against paint-chipped windows, like
toddlers' feet on tile.

© Jessica L., San Jose, CA

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SammieRM PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2014 at 11:23 am
SammieRM PLATINUM, Urbana, Missouri
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"All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream." -Edgar Allan Poe

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I love the rain and my baby brother does too. Whenever he sees it raining, he runs around the kitchen with so much happiness, it makes me happy too. 
kusbeck54 said...
on Mar. 14 2014 at 1:49 pm
kusbeck54, Lake Aril, Pennsylvania
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pain is wekness leaveing the boady ray lewis

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how did this come to your mind it is so beauitful
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on Oct. 16 2013 at 2:36 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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The simplicity of this poem reminds me of Sandburg's "Fog" and "Splinter". Just delictate and precise with its imagery. Congrats on the Editors' Choice.