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Blood and Sweat
July 27, 2013
Arms hurt, fingers numb
Diligence paid off and so
Elation I feel
© Allison F., Menlo Park, CA
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This article has 11 comments.
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 4:26 pm
OK IM SORRY! (For saying dont know if you remeber me) Haha, i was truly hoping you wouldn't forget me and i am SOO HAPPPYYY that we now have our own chat forum even tho the time differences are well different, i love hearing from you. And I will never be too lazy to reply! Haha keep rockin Dua. Love you!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2013 at 7:41 am
Hey, there! Thank you for the lovely comment. I've been good Alhumdulillah. What about you? Your latest poetry that I read was really good. Didn't get a chance to comment though,thing is my laptop has been taken for awhile and this even is a five minute thing. Hope to get back to you pretty soon. Love always.
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 1:32 pm
how I'd love to paint! and it was a nice haiku :) how are you doing?
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 1:17 pm
How do I show you the wall? :/
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 1:16 pm
OLIVIA! I miss you Much more!!!!!!!!!!! And how dare you even suggest that I could forget you?! I know I've been away for a long time. (had guests, cousins actually, been away from the internet much) But I would never forget you! I'm so happy that you love this :))) And, wow you get to play soccer. It's the one sport I would play if I could, but no opportunity. Anyway, Guess what I totally feel like doing right now?? Showing you a picture of this wall that I wrote about. It does look spectacular. All well, hard work :P Hmmm,, that sure sucks... how about reading some of your favourite books all over again. That always inspires me, or maybe music. And well, nowadays, I totally feel like writing about my travel experiences. So I posted one of them. You should read and tell me how you like it, maybe you could write one of your own....? Love you always. P.S. Don't ever say "not sure if you remember me" !
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 1:11 pm
*smiles wide* tehehehe, you bet Haiku are awesome. I love writing them, a new special one is coming up soon. Be on the lookout. Hopefully you might like it. And Thanks so much. It's great to see you around my writings nelehjr. Elated.
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 9:49 am
DUA!!!! I miss you so much!!! Not sure if you remember me, (its liv) but i miss you soo much so i decided to come check out your work cuz i have been getting emails :) i love your poem! It's funny but so true, as to everything! This is how i feel after a tough soccer game and i know tht i played well. It's kinda funny cuz today i have to paint my door so.... Anyway, just checking in miss you!!!! Keep rockin Dua! Oh and do u have any good ideas for writing cuz i have MAJOR writers block! And i can't write anything :( thts all :))
PirateCountry DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2013 at 8:00 pm
You're very welcome. I enjoyed reading it!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2013 at 9:42 am
Oh Thank you... That's so good to hear. And I am glad you could relate.Thanks ever so much for reading!
PirateCountry DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2013 at 3:14 pm
Nice job! I love that feeling of satisfaction after doing something hard too. Even if it hurts! And contrary to what you think, I believe it sounds very poetic :)