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July 5, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

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"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

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Your teeth are bridges
for your lies to cross, my heart
but an access point.

© Simon I., Lansing, NY

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vrp31 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2014 at 11:59 am
vrp31 BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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Nice work Chris!!!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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I've read many (MANY!—look at the number of commnets I've made) haikus one this site, so I'm pretty sure I'm being honest when I say one of the best. Don't doubt yourself. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:15 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

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I wouldn't say one of the best................but thank you very much.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:30 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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This haiku demonstrates that this genre isn't a trifling genre of poetry. One of the best by far on Teenink! I love how the teeth are "the bridges of your lies" and the heart "an access point".