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Hotel Insomnia MAG

June 13, 2013
By Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Welcome to Hotel
Insomnia! Please enjoy
Your extended stay.

© Katie L., Shepherdsville, KY

The author's comments:
I was inspired by the Eagles' "Hotel California." Plus, I had a hard time getting to sleep last night.
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crazysockmonkeys SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2015 at 5:58 pm
crazysockmonkeys SILVER, Boynton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I think of writing as something more organic than words, something closer to being than action." -Tennessee Williams

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I love this song, and this haiku too, of course! :)
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 7:50 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Thank you so much! :D I genuinely thought Teenink glitched when it sent me the email.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 6:38 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Congrats, Krasota. This deserved to be published. I'm so happy that it will be. It's a jewel of a haiku. 
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 8:33 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Thanks! :D Yeah it's a problem of mine every now and then.
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 8:22 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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As someone with insomnia, this made me smile :) Good job! Your haikus never fail to be interesting and witty
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 8:21 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Haha, thank you XD I'm glad it's relateable. Have a great day!
writefearless SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 9:54 am
writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
scare your fear before it scares you.

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this is very catchy. i love how it perfectly describes me. i love staying up late at night, i don't know, i just love the solitude. :)
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2013 at 12:47 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Thank you! :P
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2013 at 8:27 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that&#039;s why they call it the present&quot;

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The BEST from what I've read of yours yet.
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2013 at 5:08 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If it weren&rsquo;t for the coffee, I&rsquo;d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.&rdquo; &ndash;David Letterman

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Haha, thanks Mckay XD
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 19 2013 at 2:04 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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I love this haiku. So creative. Plus, I love that song. So BONUS!!!