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Hotel Insomnia MAG

June 13, 2013
By Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Welcome to Hotel
Insomnia! Please enjoy
Your extended stay.

© Katie L., Shepherdsville, KY

The author's comments:
I was inspired by the Eagles' "Hotel California." Plus, I had a hard time getting to sleep last night.
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crazysockmonkeys SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2015 at 5:58 pm
crazysockmonkeys SILVER, Boynton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I think of writing as something more organic than words, something closer to being than action." -Tennessee Williams

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I love this song, and this haiku too, of course! :)
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 7:50 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Thank you so much! :D I genuinely thought Teenink glitched when it sent me the email.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 21 2013 at 6:38 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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Congrats, Krasota. This deserved to be published. I'm so happy that it will be. It's a jewel of a haiku. 
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 8:33 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Thanks! :D Yeah it's a problem of mine every now and then.
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 8:22 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

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As someone with insomnia, this made me smile :) Good job! Your haikus never fail to be interesting and witty
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 8:21 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Haha, thank you XD I'm glad it's relateable. Have a great day!
writefearless SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2013 at 9:54 am
writefearless SILVER, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
scare your fear before it scares you.

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this is very catchy. i love how it perfectly describes me. i love staying up late at night, i don't know, i just love the solitude. :)
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2013 at 12:47 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Thank you! :P
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2013 at 8:27 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

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The BEST from what I've read of yours yet.
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2013 at 5:08 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 444 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

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Haha, thanks Mckay XD
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 19 2013 at 2:04 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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I love this haiku. So creative. Plus, I love that song. So BONUS!!!