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Hypocrite
February 6, 2013
Realization hit
She's another player
in this game: pretend.
© Lindsey V., Aberdeen, SD
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SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on May. 25 2013 at 5:35 am
Hahhaa you're the best Liv! I know how it went all screwy and you're the only one who actually did something and I'm ever so happy how you were desperately trying to fix it somehow :D LOve you.
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2013 at 8:32 pm
Thanks!!! It means a lot when someone says to me: your stuff is great! Just wanna let you know that your stuff is too. Since I am no ABLE TO SEE THE COMMENTS!!!! you can delete that wierd one up there about how i couldn' see them :P oh, and maybe i should try subscribing *evil grin at computer* Haha just kidding, so yeah, Livs my name ;) Anyway, YOU BETTER SEND ME A SIGNED COPY!!!!! Anywho....your stuff rocks, so dont think that tons of comments ensure that you are awesome, something I already know, because your work is definatly one of my fav's! And your one of my favorite people!!!! That's all for now Saphira......keep rockin :)
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2013 at 8:01 pm
Hey! Like I said on Smile, I still can't see the freaking comments!!! Soo, I have choosen the polite route, and am notifying you that I love your work, and am not aviding you when you reply, I am simply just blinded form them :P Ok, thats all, oh, and when I finally did comment on Smile, I saw the comments!!! so i dont know, its al very screwy. hahaha ok, Saphira, Keep rockin
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2013 at 12:44 pm
Oh my my my! Thank You Liv! By the way.. you know subscribing does have its advantges, now I know where the nick "Liv" comes from .... *fake evil smile* LOl.. No I love your name really... And now... Wowiee... This is cloud 9 ... I mean you guys are really starting to make me feel like I am something and Hey, I sure will,, when I have enough Haiku I'm thinking maybe I'll sketch stuff like for every one of it to make the book more interesting and personal and then I'll get it published..... And Don't worry I will DEFINITELY post you like ten copies :DD When I'm publishing I'll ask your address and save some money to post stuff abroad and believe me I will do it. You can bet on it.... But truly now, coming out of this, as you can see I told Mckay I'm not too much experienced at this and desperately need your feedback..From all you amazing people out here... so that I can do even better... AND HELLO..stop belittling your stuff.. I LOVE IT...What ??you're trying to make out my choice isn't good? No, FYI it is! Love ya. :P
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2013 at 6:41 pm
I love this!!! Even I wrote a couple haiku's myself, I usually don't like them, but yours I LOVE!!! I mean like you can only get better from here. YOur work is awesome, especialy your haiku's!!! Maybe someday you could like get a collection of haikus make it inot a book, publish it, and in the about the author part, out your teenink screeen name, so when I buy a signed copy I can totally be like "hey!!! I know you!!!" hahahaha just an idea! Great job! keep rockin
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:56 pm
There, I put it on my sticky notes, now I'll definitely check it out soon. And again thank you ever so much for all this praise, it's just overwhelming.
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 3:54 am
Oh, thank YOU so much Mckay! Really though I only just started writing Haiku's two months ago and I have no idea who Basho or Buson are ,, *please don't kill me* but I'm so happy that you like them so much as to compliment me like this. Really, thank you!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 12:47 pm
"your writings" means generally writing or mine in particular?? sorry to bug you I was just confused plus a teeny bit curious...
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 12:37 pm
Hey! Thank you so much! You've read other stuff of mine??
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 26 2013 at 5:24 am
Thank You so much!! I'm happy that you read it and like it and then commented too...Thank you..And I sure will keep posting :)))))))
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 2:55 pm
This is good! I agree, you have what it takes to be in the mag. :) Keep up the good work and keep submitting new stuff!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 20 2013 at 10:36 am
I haven't had that many but ever since I moved here, all there have been many... And Thank YOU ever so much for the feedback! I'm so happy you read these :D
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 19 2013 at 12:03 am
I hate that moment of realization, guess I've had to many of them. :P Great poem, you're probably going to be in the mag soon, I can feel it. :)
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 11:26 am
thank YOU!!
thatunknownthing DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 3:44 am
very precise and meaningful. Fantabulous job. 5/5!
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