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Smile
January 30, 2013
At the mouth, her quest
begins and reaches fullness
at the knowing eyes.
© Katya K.
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Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 25 2013 at 11:35 am
Haha yeah, at least now, I can see them. Although it dd hapen on one of my haiku's for about a day then cleared up. Are you able to see the comments now? I truly hope so. Have a nice day Dua. (oh, and that is not hard to pronounce at all!) Keep writing and rockin ;)
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on May. 25 2013 at 5:32 am
Don't be sorry actually I was so infuriated about that too..as I couldn't see any of mine either and as you said it was only happening with my stuff!!.... bUT hopefully now they're all fixed up and the comments are visible ... And I really love talking to you to... Lets hope TeenInk gets some better website designers ... and updates.... :P
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2013 at 7:59 pm
Hey Saphira! Ummmmmmm sorry for replying soo late, and I know that this isn't replying, it's just that I can't see any of the comments!!! I mean like right now I still can't, and it only happens on your work and it dives me crazy cuz your sooo nice and I really like to chat!!! Sorry, for the late reply, just wanted to let you know that I TRiED! haha oh well, i emailed them a while ago so we will see what happens :( as for now.......Keep rockin!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2013 at 1:00 pm
Hey!! No you're not.. You're actually suddenly becoming one of my fav. people around here AND not cause you read my stuff NO... Because I read a lot of your feedback on other people's stuff too and LIv, you're always so encouraging and honest and nice and I alway love the way you never forget to use your pet sentence "Keep rocking!" This one time, I'll say it to you, this awesome person, Keep rocking!
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on May. 5 2013 at 6:44 pm
Another amazing haiku!!! (sorry, im sucha creeper, i just love your stuff) Great job, I love every aspect. Beautiful, simple, poignent. Love, love love! Keep rockin Saphira!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:58 pm
And thank YOU for your feedback!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:58 pm
Of course not. I'm going to read a whole lot of stuff by you today. Get ready to receive a ton of feedback my dear Mckay!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 23 2013 at 10:09 am
haha, I guess I accidentally posted the reply up there...LOL..
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 23 2013 at 10:08 am
Wow, such deep interpretation,,,...I guess I had a simpler thing in mind ,, yours fits a lot too, especially with the words "Knowing eyes" in it...ANd THANK YOU! Thank you!
When I read this it makes me think of a guy who is in love with a girl, who always seems sad, but he treasures the few times he's ever seen her smile because it's absolutely beautiful. I liked the "quest" comparison because it sometimes does feel like a quest trying to smile! So great job! xD
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 11:20 am
Hey, Thanks! LOved your feedback...
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 1:05 pm
Aw, this is great! I have never thought about a smile as a quest, but I loved the way you discribed it!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 10:35 pm
Gee Thank YOU!! Thank you for reading and for the feedback... :)))
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 10:08 pm
This is so sweet!
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 1:07 pm
Oh thank YOU! That's what I think and that's why I put it in there, like if the smile just stays to the teeth, and doesn't light up the face, it's definitely faked....OH and Thanks so much for reading it too!! :D SO glad you like it.
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 11:05 am
Thank You! :)
SamanthaMund GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 12:29 pm
i love the comparison
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