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November 18, 2012
By perks123 GOLD, Scarsdale, New York
perks123 GOLD, Scarsdale, New York
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A barren hollow
The one refuge for tired.
Hearts beat less in here



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on Dec. 12 2012 at 11:34 pm
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Time and the bell have buried the day,<br /> The black cloud carries the sun away&quot; - Elliot<br /> <br /> Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn&#039;t know we had one. - Into the Woods

Beautifully written, emotional and a original concept.

on Nov. 25 2012 at 12:04 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never fear shadows. They simply mean there&#039;s a light shining somewhere nearby.&quot; - Unknown

Wow. This really hit me. My favorite part about this is how you say "here" instead of "there". It adds a TON of mood into this short 3-lined poem. You've crammed loads of mood into this piece, and I applaud you. Great job!