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Nighttime Nightmares

January 25, 2012
By MyInspirations22 GOLD, Bethel Park, Pennsylvania
MyInspirations22 GOLD, Bethel Park, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothings going right, TURN LEFT!!!!!"


Falling to the ground,
staring up at her killer,
drained of all her blood.

She grasped her neck,
two puncture wounds lying there,
dying eyes open.


The author's comments:
I decided to make two Haikus to make a story, I like to take different approaches towards things. Hope you like!

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on Feb. 5 2012 at 1:33 pm
MyInspirations22 GOLD, Bethel Park, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothings going right, TURN LEFT!!!!!"

Thanks :). I'm planning on writing a story/ poetry book similar to this.

on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:44 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

Well, love the title. The haiku was pretty good---I like that you focused on the victim.