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Time Flies

December 28, 2011
By meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
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meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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time flies, with all the
lies, that come and go, at their
owners' clear leisure

© Rachel U., Danbury, CT

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oh, boredom... it can lead to such great things!
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browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:11 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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I'll try and read it sometime this weekend...sounds great!! :)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 4:24 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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okay! it is about sibling rivalry... like stepbrothers but more serious and about sisters! it is kinda based on me and my sister and our relationship :P
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 4:24 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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okay! it is about sibling rivalry... likestepbrothers but more serious and about sisters! it is kinda based on me and my sister and our relationship :P
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:58 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Well...let me know when it is and I'll read it! :)
starrfishy said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 6:01 pm
starrfishy, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"I am thankful for laughter, except when milk comes out of my nose" -Joci Mulherin (aka...my fabulous and adorable little sister.)

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few words, but straight and clear to the point. i like it:)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:57 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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*short story
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:56 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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thank you! i'm working on a sort story that will be done in couple weeks!
sany.lastflame PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:19 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
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I love this poem! It does feel like its missing something. If I were you, I would change the second line and use some different, more powerful word choice that really draws the reader in, like the very last line!
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:25 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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You're awsome meals...write more!!!
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:06 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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thanks! (:
Fabala_G BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:02 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

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I like the internal rhyme! Good job!
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:45 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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If you get a moment you shoul check out some of my stuff.... :)
meals100 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:41 pm
meals100 SILVER, Grafton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never take life seriously. no one gets out alive anyways."

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thank you!(:
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:54 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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I like it. Not everyone can pull a haiku off...