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Him with Me

February 18, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

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His power draws me
in a way i cannot say
for now we still talk.

now im trying to fill in space. space space space space space space

© Justin R., Angola, IN

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Pillow BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:23 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
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I know. I don't really understand haikus sometimes but It stinks that it won't work to post them easially. Some of my stories are so long it's horrible when I try to post any of it. 1000 words just isn't long enough.
Karlynne PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:49 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

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yah, that really made me mad. they let you put haikus on here but they have to be 100 characters? i mean come on! its a 5,7,5 poem. how many words do they expect it to have? even if you used one word for every syllible its still only 17 words.
Pillow BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 11:20 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
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LOL I has little poems that I can't post for that reason either. It's a sweet poem though. Yours I mean. Sweet like a feather rose.
bamboom212 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 9:32 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

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lol really good. luv it. ha so u know, u can just write like little symbols 2 fill the space. like ................. or something. gr8 job
Karlynne PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:38 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

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awww thank yah. the stupid word counter thingy kept tellin me that i didnt have 100 characters, so i just wrote space.lol. alot.
AuraAbyss BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:33 pm
AuraAbyss BRONZE, Lapeer, Michigan
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If you think that something small cannot make a difference, try going to sleep with a mosquito in the room. <br /> Anonymous

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Short, Sweet and To the point... I <3 it. Great work