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November 28, 2009
By rofl-copter SILVER, Trumbull, Connecticut
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rofl-copter SILVER, Trumbull, Connecticut
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"No ordinary wings I need, the sky itself will carry me"

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the sky cries in pain
as the lightning whips the clouds
tears fall from heaven


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this poem has no title. hence: (none) also, disregard the periods at the end, i needed more characters to get it published.
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crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:58 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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Wow i love this!! its so interesting!!  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
itscomplicated PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:28 pm
itscomplicated PLATINUM, Boxford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The best way out is always through." -Robert Frost "I think, therefore I am." -René Descartes
"Life is never easy for those who dream." -Robert James Waller

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Wow. again dreamcatcher delivers = ) amazing.
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 4:23 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
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"the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be" - unknown

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wow- never thought of the rain that way before... this is fab, keep writing..
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:14 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

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wow very short yet so deep & powerful! i <3 it!! keep writing.

very creative