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Candy Heart

November 23, 2009
By BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Little candy heart,

Lying deep down on green grass,

You have all my love.

............................

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

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BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2012 at 11:07 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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why thank you!!!!!   =]

-Roze

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2012 at 11:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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thx a bunch, i appreciate the feedback!

-Roze

elizabethlong BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:11 am
elizabethlong BRONZE, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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Very good, even though it was short it worked, you did an amazing job!!!!!
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:39 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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&#039;&#039; there is nothing to fear but fear its self&#039;&#039;

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very deep and very sweet poem conveyed in three little lines...i like it alot, great job.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:38 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks for the feedback, I'm really glad you like it!

-Rose

 

jrose said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 8:48 am
this is so pretty the poem realy is and the person who wrote it was realy good to i love this poem
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Woot!  Thx so much for your comment  :D  I appreciate it greatly.

-Rose

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:06 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks!  I love how you give the candy heart so much character, lolz!  :)

-Rose

Bush said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 9:44 am
Made me at first feel bad for the discarded candy heart who was (likely) tossed aside or dropped by two lovers, but then, I felt good for the heart, that someone appreciated it.
vicious-fiction PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 3:47 pm
vicious-fiction PLATINUM, Santee, California
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AMAZING!! so muuch deep feeling in 3 little lines
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 7:39 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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you're welcome! love the poems!

 

BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:16 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it a lot!  Thanks for all the comments!

-Rose

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 6:19 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

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love this!! lots of emotion in a short little poem. great job! 5 out of 5.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:49 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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lolz thx!  that's what i meant for it i geuss

-Rose

Little Bud said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:30 pm
Short but sweet...literally.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:41 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Thanks for the comment!  And I'm sure you write fine, great even, you just need more self confidence!  Trust me, mine is dangerously low!  That's why I had a fake name when I first came on here.  It's good to start with haikus, just find a pic that inspires you and get typing!  You'll get better, trust me!  Just rememeber the 5/7/5 rule.  ;)

-Rose

Beard Goth Lady said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 5:47 am
this poem is beautiful how do people write things like this every time i try i fail miserably
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 10:39 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Sure! We all have to be inspired someowhere!

-Rose
Brittaner DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 8:07 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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&quot;words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them&quot; <br /> -Me (random thought)

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your welcome nice to know someone other than me does that.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 4:47 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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Yes, 2/3 of the time I am inspired by pictures I see, mostly on teen ink! Thanks for the comment!

-Rose