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Agony and Ecstasy

April 28, 2016
By Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
11 articles 0 photos 27 comments

She is my drug

I watch her leave like the wind that blows

The smoke that leaves my mouth

She makes me feel good...

That's why I keep taking a hit

I keep going back for it

She helps with the pain 

That's why I love it

She's killing my loves

But I still want it,

Though she causes pain

She helps take away the pain in my heart

She burns fast,

And I can't put her out to keep it

I love the way she makes me feel when she's in between my fingers

She's burning slow and I can't put her out

The author's comments:

"A girl who is a drug causing pain to his heart instead of his lungs. She is like .... . She helps ease the pain in his heart, like .... takes your mind off of the stress in life. But she is hurting his heart like smoking is hurting his lungs. He keeps getting hurt but doesn't care because it feels good. She burns fast, she leaves and goes away fast. He loves the way she makes him feel, he loves the way it feels when he has her in his arms."


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jedjake BRONZE said...
on Sep. 20 2016 at 8:04 pm
jedjake BRONZE, Austin, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is the way the world ends not with a bang but a whimper- T.S Eliot

Fare the well to that boy, I feel he may not have much life left in him if she never returns. I know that feeling