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Jewels of the Dome

March 31, 2016
By TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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Inside lies beauty,
a glorious luminesces that can
Deceive foes, can
Read woes, can
Lure tranquility, can
Find vulnerability…..
Serpents hide within jewels and lies
Still, the jewels remain precious


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem around the time when I felt like I was vulnerable. Thats my personal interpertation but anyone can take what they need from it. If anyone can get anything from it its just to watch out for deceving people.


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on Apr. 21 2016 at 12:44 pm
TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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Thanks love the support !!!! :) :) :)

on Apr. 21 2016 at 12:44 pm
TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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I love you so much this mean a lot thanks a million

on Apr. 21 2016 at 12:43 pm
TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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Thank you so much for checking out my work this mean so much to me thank you thank you thank you.

on Apr. 21 2016 at 12:43 pm
TheOneandOnlyDL BRONZE, Southfield, Michigan
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Omg thank you so much you have no idea what this mean to me!!!

on Apr. 19 2016 at 9:42 pm
CrazyNinjaGirl SILVER, Unknown, California
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Favorite Quote:
Im not crazy i just have a twisted imagination<br /> <br /> we&#039;re all mad here - the Cheshire Cat

I really like the way it is worded it was so beautiful. Good job!

on Apr. 19 2016 at 9:41 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Take a lesson from &quot;the Greatest Man That Ever Lived,&quot; Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses.&quot; - Me, 2017<br /> <br /> &quot;Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?&quot; - Corey Graves, 2016

Excellent piece of work. This is a literally jewel indeed!

on Apr. 19 2016 at 9:40 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Such an elegant and soothing flow this poem has, with words so uniquely paired to create such unique sentences and rhythm, I'll be definitely checking you out some more.

Cam_is_Away said...
on Apr. 19 2016 at 9:34 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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The picture paired with this poem is too perfect. You did a great job! I really enjoyed it and it's definitely one of my favorites. How you were able to describe it all so simply but so well, it's captivating. You definitely have a talent for writing! Keep it up! I can't wait to read your next work :)