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I wished upon a falling star

September 24, 2015
By PTsaxplayer GOLD, Boiling Springs, South Carolina
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"I am as old as I've ever been, but I'm as young as I'll ever be." -Robert O'Neill

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I wished upon a falling star
to find out who I am
for I was like a newborn child
that could not walk or stand

And as I watched this falling star
that fell down from above
I expected to find my identity
but instead my heart found love

For this was not a falling star
but and angel sent from heaven
who showed me who I was to be
and helped me see my blessings

And as my heart began to wake
this boy from South Carolina
I fell in love with a beautiful girl
and angel named Savannah
 

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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To my beautiful girlfriend Savannah who is the light of my world and my sweet angel.

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futurista12 ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2015 at 10:52 pm
futurista12 ELITE, Far Rockaway, New York
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This is so sweet!