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Strong emotion

February 28, 2015
By Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
18 articles 2 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you can be anyone just be you unless you could be Buffy Summers then be Buffy Summers"


Love is an emotion that is so stong it hurts,
Love is an emotion that you can't explian,
Love is our band-aids in this world,
Love can be our medicine to sadness or lonelyness,
Love is powerful,
Love is amazing,
Without it, our world wouldn't be the same,
Love is something you thought you could imaigne,
When really it is unimaganible,
What is it about this emotion, that makes people do cazy things?
You  don't get choose when love comes it just does.
                            I don't know.
That is just love.


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by people falling in love.  It was also inspired my boyfriend.


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on Jul. 25 2015 at 3:55 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
22 articles 1 photo 259 comments
Interesting, but as @Letterstojuliet said, it flows wierd because of commas. But otherwise its great and I was touched. You're a great poet with a lot of talent!

Tamie GOLD said...
on May. 5 2015 at 9:28 am
Tamie GOLD, Sonora, California
18 articles 2 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you can be anyone just be you unless you could be Buffy Summers then be Buffy Summers"

Thank you both.

on Apr. 8 2015 at 7:23 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
21 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

That's cute, I LOVE it! ;)

on Apr. 4 2015 at 8:01 pm
Letterstojuliet GOLD, Bremerton, Washington
13 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm in love with you, and I'm not in the business of denying myself the simple pleasure of saying true things. I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into the void, and that oblivion is inevitable, and that we're all doomed and that there will come a day when all our labor has been returned to dust, and I know the sun will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you" - The fault in our stars

I love it, the flow is weird because of the commas. but its really good.