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Mind Caution

February 27, 2015
By She.is.her SILVER, Kingwood, Texas
She.is.her SILVER, Kingwood, Texas
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Her name is no harmony

Hear her blessed blessing

No symphany

Seeing what can not be seen by the eye

The eyes of others

Shy is her serenity

For not to come lately does he

Simple a task

Too good to last

A common plea

Resentless sanity to comfort her

Though to be certain

There is no certainy

Clearly no mono is in radious

She is hesitant to vouch her last chance at truth

She sees no more

Lost

Helpless

Stripes blur her vision 

Satin ribons of deep red cascade

Hope

Is no longer in her agenda

Yet so close


The author's comments:

In this piece I clear up how one might describe lost hope, faith, or cause. "She" is caught up so much so in her own devistation that it becomes over powering and she looses self control. She "pleas" for peace but feels like no one is listening, especially peace himself. She doesnt know how to help herself and in the end she resorts to the worst but she is vaugely aware of how near closure is. Now is your time to reach out for closure.  


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on Mar. 3 2015 at 6:54 pm
She.is.her SILVER, Kingwood, Texas
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Thank you, that really means a lot. I have never actually shown my poetry to people anf i am thrilled that you and everyone else appreciate it.

on Mar. 3 2015 at 8:39 am
kikixkupkake GOLD, San Marcos, California
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"The things that walk out when we open our minds." -Dylan McCoy

I adore the way you personified peace but kept it mysterious enough for it to not be overwhelming. Also, your language in this poem is very poise and professional sounding yet still casual enough to maintain interest of the reader. Good work!