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A Loom of Memories

January 9, 2015
By MatchaJasmine SILVER, Delhi, Other
MatchaJasmine SILVER, Delhi, Other
5 articles 0 photos 49 comments

I sleep tucked in my time wrap,
Floating between the dreamy skies
and the sea of reality.
The sands watch over the horizons
as I imprint them with sweet memories.
Why does the wind on my forehead,
sometimes feel like the soft caress
of my mother’s hand?
I rush through the mornings
when a kid’s cycle-
pulls at the strings of my bag,
and a scar on my elbow makes me smile.
I fascinate as how I outgrew
my kindergarten teacher-
Her petite frame was so overbearing,
not so long ago.
So many friends stopped, played along
and moved on.
I walked on only to realize
how invaluable was their touch,
and how I grew through the heartbreaks and joys.
I keep my memories with reverence.
For they are in the intricate enigmatic design
of the universe, of which I pass by, enriched.
Memories of the days when everything
new was so fascinating,
Yet, I was all knowing.
Not so long ago,
As the days pile on now
the lesser I know.
The complexities baffle me,
The beauty stupefies me-
Between sleep and wakefulness,
dreams and reality,
In this time wrap I move
With the treasure of my memories…


The author's comments:

Memories enrich our life and our most precious treasure.


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on Dec. 31 2016 at 10:40 am
Black_Pool BRONZE, Al Sharjah, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everything is beautiful but beautiful isn't everything.

Just love it:)

on Dec. 6 2016 at 3:22 am
LeisurelySketches GOLD, Tricity, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Your life has a limit but knowledge has none. (Zhuangzi)

Loved the theme. Such a well described poem with expressive emotions. Great writing.

on Oct. 2 2016 at 5:55 am
gayatrielliot BRONZE, Delhi , Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The autumn leaves are a riot of color. They remind us of the good, colorful things, and their crunch beneath our shoes also bids adieu to all bad things that have long gone,"

It is an awesome poem. Very descriptive, with an apt title. I think you actually have a 'way with words'. That proves you're one of the few talented poets I've ever read! Keep posting!

mirakle GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2016 at 1:25 pm
mirakle GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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I like the poem and the title.

KMG28 SILVER said...
on May. 16 2016 at 3:56 pm
KMG28 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than I

This poem has that magic to it, that ability to relate to you deep inside. I know a lot of people have told you that is amazing and I am one more. Thank you for this beauty.

Amalia said...
on Mar. 31 2016 at 8:34 am
Amalia, Gradville, Michigan
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I really like this poem the reader can understand all the images presented in the stanzas.

on Feb. 18 2016 at 10:40 pm
caseyrebecca BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
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Have you posted this elsewhere at all?

Kirika GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2015 at 7:50 am
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

I love the title *^*

JennyR. said...
on Sep. 22 2015 at 11:38 am
JennyR., New York, New York
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good work!

JulieC. BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2015 at 1:48 pm
JulieC. BRONZE, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up, never give in, and when the upper hand is ours, may we have the ability to handle the win with the dignity that we absorbed the loss.
~Doug Williams

I really like your comment.. :) It's really funny. @TanviS

on May. 12 2015 at 11:47 am
Allison16 BRONZE, International Falls, Minnesota
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I like your choice of words you used! Good writing

on Apr. 29 2015 at 1:10 pm
MatchaJasmine SILVER, Delhi, Other
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This is my original work conceived and written by me. Period.

Machine14 said...
on Apr. 29 2015 at 1:07 pm
Really interesting!

on Apr. 29 2015 at 7:47 am
Crosswings BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Stolen. :/ Not cool man, after all these years of rewriting and reposting my poetry you just had to steal one. Don't try to go through with others stuff and try to rewrite it e.e

12yearold said...
on Apr. 12 2015 at 1:47 pm
Your poems are enchanting, what I love best is the strength of the description that takes you to a different place.

on Mar. 18 2015 at 6:13 pm
beAWESOMEstayAWESOME BRONZE, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Work hard in silence and let your accomplishments make the noise."

WOAH! ASTONISHING! *THUMBS UP* KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!

David14 said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 9:02 am
David14, Faridabad, Other
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You're a stupendous writer! Your poems deserve being on the first page!

TGIF said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:44 am
Your poem makes me smile in reminiscence! Well done!

on Feb. 24 2015 at 9:47 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

It flows very well, and I can relate to quite a lot of the things you've written about The front page well deserved, Jasmine11!

on Feb. 20 2015 at 7:43 pm
DragonWriter11 GOLD, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"The only person in this world who can write your life story is you. Don't hand the pen over to someone else just because they made one chapter miserable."

Nice job!!!! I loved how you made your words flow together. It seemed like the salad bowl of life....... and the memories were the bacon bits!!!! GREAT JOB OVERALL!!! Please keep writing!!!