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Illusions of the Adolescent

January 5, 2015
By Lynnie16 GOLD, Mt. Pleasant, South Carolina
Lynnie16 GOLD, Mt. Pleasant, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;ve been thinking, Hobbes.&quot;<br /> &quot;On a weekend?&quot;<br /> &quot;Well, it wasn&#039;t on purpose.&quot;<br /> <br /> --Calvin and Hobbes


They gather apart
from the desks, in a
deeply knitted assemble,
held together by strain
And ardor. They are
acclaimed- they strut
past, feathers sprawled
with subtle beams.
Flowered perfume and
chestnut soap fills the
hallway, as waning eyes
scrutinize the arrangements.
For a moment,
the air is obscured
as a girl
lowers her eyes
at the curly hair and
glasses, with braced mouth
and pudgy face
and flyaway lips.
The music- the allurement
of the metal
and riffs
whispers the unknown, the
unattainable.
In a fairytale, no
beauty
is undiscovered- we are told
we are beautiful,
but if everyone is beauteous,
who
is eminent?

 

If she waits
long
enough- if the stars
single their gaze,
she knows the time will come.
God will
place her
if no one else
will.
 


The author's comments:

In writing this, I want to capture remininscences of the adolescent fantasy; anybody who was young can recall moments when they considered they deserved finer.


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on Aug. 19 2015 at 7:20 pm
Orabilis BRONZE, Little Ferry, New Jersey
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This is really well written, so well written that I'm jealous! Keep writing. You have talent.