Cravings | Teen Ink


July 11, 2014
By Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You May Encounter Many Defeats But You Must Not Be Defeated" By- Dr. Maya Angelou

The Thing About The Crave Is That It Is Unpredictable
The Unknowing When Are Able To Fulfill It
Everyone Craves For Different Things
Some Cravings Tend To Stay And Others Tend To Fade
Most People Today Don’t Understand What The Crave Is
My Craves Are Different From Your Craves
I Don’t Know How Much Longer I Can Hold Off
As My Soul Slowly Withers Away
The Craving Get Stronger And Starts To Take Control
The Craving For My Mother’s Love Leaves Me In Tears
The Craving For My Father Leaves Me In Anger
The Craving For The Acceptance In Society Leaves Me In Wonder
The Craving For My Family Leaves Me In Fear
The Thing About The Crave is That It Is Unpredictable
The Unknowing If You Are To Fulfill It

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on Mar. 3 2015 at 12:59 am
kikixkupkake GOLD, San Marcos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The things that walk out when we open our minds." -Dylan McCoy

Your style is quite evident in all your poetry, but the capitalization is taking away from the beauty of your words meaning by placing too much on appearance. If you read this out loud, it seems to flow pretty smoothly, which is good, but still features some grammar mistakes. With a bit of revision, this poem could have a much stronger impact on those who read it.

on Feb. 16 2015 at 5:04 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I agree with Kaavya- maybe less capitalization?

KaavyaM SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 9:39 am
KaavyaM SILVER, Hyderabad, Other
9 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.

This is a hugely interesting topic to write a poem on, and you've done a great job on it, especially by personifying 'The Crave'. However, the capitalisation was a bit too distracting.

Longlegs GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2014 at 8:52 am
Longlegs GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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How true! You chose such an interesting topic. Keep writing.