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Forgive Me, But

June 23, 2014
By gboo12 SILVER, Bergen County, New Jersey
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Almost like a
Pimple on my forehead
Scratches on my glasses
I'm bothered now

Your voice sounds like
Lawnmowers
On a perfect morning
Your mouth tells me one thing
Your eyes tell me lies
Pathetic
I won't forgive you

Sorry

But I can't love
You a day or a month
Longer than I have
Because
You're different now

© Anna Y., St. Robert, MO

The author's comments:
I wrote this for my Creative Writing final exam. We had to follow the same syllables as the poem titled Apology by William Carlos Williams and follow the theme of apologizing. I was really proud of it because I wrote it on the spot and thought I should upload it here.
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AutumnMoon BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2014 at 1:12 pm
AutumnMoon BRONZE, Lebanon, Maine
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Out of all of your pieces that I have read so far, I like this one the best. It was truely beautiful and I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope you got a good grade on this in your creative writing class. Wonderful! 5/5
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 13 2014 at 10:38 am
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This is wonderful. In sme ways, I can rather connect. You really do have a talent and ligh in you, and you are talented and wonderful. :) You do have such, a beautiful way of writing. Thank you, so much for sharing this. You wre just honest and your poem is full of emotion. :) Thank you again. 
Popcornjazz SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2014 at 3:13 pm
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Wow I loved it it was deep
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jun. 29 2014 at 3:05 pm
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I loved this! Great emotion! XD
WOWriting SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 10:42 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Glad i could help :)
gboo12 SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 7:06 am
gboo12 SILVER, Bergen County, New Jersey
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thank you so much. it means a lot to me! now that I am looking at it, the title doesn't fit (you are right). It didn't have a title to begin with so I just came up with something quick. Thank you so much for your feedback 
WOWriting SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:02 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Like the emotion in this :) only critisizm is that i think you could have u used 'forgive me, but' in the poem. other than that, great!