All You Want, All I Want | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. All You Want, All I Want

All You Want, All I Want

June 18, 2014
By RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
More by this author
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,"

View profile

Bringing stars from heaven is an impossible task
But to bring a star for you all you have to do is ask
Bring the moon from heaven is an impossible task
But if that is your wish I will make it pass
Bring the sun out into the rain is a difficult task
But if you are sad I will command the clouds to pass
Bringing a smile on your face is all I want

© Adam L., Washington, DC

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I'm going through a different stage in my life. A time that most people will experience sometime in their early stages of life. Where the like someone and will do anything for that someone. I want people to know that love isn't just a one way street. Both people in a relationship have to give and take. Also love isn't about giving expensive things for each other, it's about making each other happy
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Silence
By bitty09 SILVER
Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Doll House Living
By sgrace SILVER
West Chester, Pennsylvania
sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 22 photos 18 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Unraveling Scarf
By kiwi12 PLATINUM
Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
View profile
Poetry
Oh, let me be
By Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD
Coffeyville, Kansas
Forgotten_and_Lost GOLD, Coffeyville, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Whisper
By Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND
Sapello, New Mexico
Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND, Sapello, New Mexico
62 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
Poetry
Nothing good comes from Pyromania
By Nelle PLATINUM
Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.

RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 6:14 pm
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,"

View profile
Why thank you. I'm very flattered and I will keep them coming. 
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 12 2014 at 9:55 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

View profile
I agree with what you said! It's true! Love is loving someone else or people mor than yourselves and just wanting to make them happy. You're poem is wonderful! You're a great writer! I hope more poems are coming! ^_^ thank you, for sharing this!
RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 11:50 am
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,"

View profile
so if i did what would it do?
RebeccaReader PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 5 2014 at 9:19 am
RebeccaReader PLATINUM, New York, New York
20 articles 2 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,"

View profile
yes it was for you know who. but i don't know if i shoudl share it. would it get his attention if i did?
monikitty12 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2014 at 6:53 pm
monikitty12 PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because its over. Smile because it happened.

View profile
awwwwww this is so sweet! Is this for a certain someone? Maybe you should share this link on facebook lol just a suggestion ;)