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Demon In The Light

May 28, 2014
By BikerPrincess GOLD, Jerico Springs, Missouri
BikerPrincess GOLD, Jerico Springs, Missouri
12 articles 0 photos 4 comments

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This sweet, dark angel with all her secrets and fears. I want to save her.


In the light, she hides
For then they can see it in her eyes
The demon that lye's inside
In the darkness, she thrives
Her biggest fear as a child
Now, a blanket of comfort
A safe haven
As she sits in a corner of the room
Head in her knees, drawn to her chest
Tears escaping closed eyes
Darkness surrounds her, comforting and reassuring
Trying to fight the demon inside
Her body grows weak
This evil being to strong to tame
Suddenly, everything stills
Disbelieving she thinks, It's done
Keeping her eyes closed, she stands
Takes a shaky breath and
After a moment
A small smile begins to creep across her face
Her body convulses
A strangled cry escapes her lips
The lights come on
Her eyes fly open
Shining bright, gorgeous red
In the light, she thrives
In the darkness, she hides
The demon has taken over



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on Jun. 13 2014 at 1:57 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

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“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Dark, but incredibly well written and entertaining to read. There were a few grammar issues (in one place, "to" should be "too") and the punctuation could be better, but it doesn't subtract from the overall impact of the poem :) Really good, keep writing!