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Snow Battle

May 12, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Snow came down in torrents,
a cry for my soldiers warrants.
Roses with frozen petals,
Birds frosted in their nettles,
Winter came like a battle,
war and strife, and brattle,
Snow and ice, cold and dreary,
made all the pretty things weary.
The endless white sheet,
we all prayed for heat,
while all things sweet
died young.

© Anton J., Philadelphia, PA

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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Jul. 25 2014 at 2:01 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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 I am very glad you like it! :)
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 24 2014 at 5:25 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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I know this might sound silly, but we do live ina snow battle. So good, that's all I can say. Thanks for sharing this!
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on May. 24 2014 at 10:31 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thank You @WinterRose! XD
WinterRose76 SILVER said...
on May. 22 2014 at 6:49 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
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Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

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I love the colorful vocabulary in your poem! Especially "Brattle". I like the meaning as well. Five stars!