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Incomplete

May 2, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


Empty spaces between my fingers
Cry to get them filled with yours;
Silent phases start taking their pace
Through all my moments in the dark.
The sky turns dark blue,
The quiet widens and the cold thickens;
The tears from my eyes
Roll down to kiss my cheek.

My heart fails skipping you for a beat,
’cause it knows- you can never set it free.
My breath continues
Just to stop some day, for you.

I can never relinquish you,
’cause the sky is never off its blue,
The breeze can’t ever be away from soothe
and love can never be far from truth.

I wish I could get the temperature to low centigrade,
And I wish to have the nostalgia
frozen in my embrace;
I still wish the time to repeat
But my ode to our love
Is left Incomplete
Without your rhyme to it!


The author's comments:
Maybe you are far; maybe this span of your absence is short. But it let me realize the depth of our love.

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on Aug. 1 2014 at 7:21 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

WOW. This so AMAZING. You're really talented.

on Aug. 1 2014 at 11:24 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

You are truly gifted, you know?! I can't seem to find the perfect words or even good enough just to describe your poem ^_^ it was so deep, emotional and so poetic. I'm really impressed and especially glad cuz I got to see your msg on the chat room "that's how I took a little look on your poem ;)" keep up the great work and never stop writing cuz you're amazing :D

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on Jul. 10 2014 at 12:28 am
deleted00304, Somewhere, Colorado
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I love this. You are one talented poet.

on May. 10 2014 at 6:58 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Our passion is our strength.&quot; <br /> -Billie Joe Armstrong

Loved loved loved loved. (: