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Absence MAG

November 27, 2008
By Ankarina BRONZE, Brampton, Cumbria, Other
Ankarina BRONZE, Brampton, Cumbria, Other
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peeling back the
blue tuesday
sky the
absence of everything
tore through my heart.
our orange wall
disfigured my imagination
and what I thought was
love
was but imagination;
disfigured, distraught
with eternal fulminating.
ah, the potency of
poetic cogitation!



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on Mar. 24 2011 at 6:47 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?&quot;<br /> -Chuang Tzu<br /> <br /> &quot;No man with a good car needs to be justified!&quot;<br /> -Wise Blood

i loved how you ended it. great job!brava!

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 6:09 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

wow.......... thats all i have to say. 

on Sep. 18 2010 at 7:21 pm
CammyLashay SILVER, Java, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Failure is not for me.

I freakin LOVE this poem

on Nov. 9 2009 at 2:35 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

on Aug. 31 2009 at 10:09 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

This is very beautiful. Good job! If you have time, please check out my work. Comment and rate please!

on Aug. 31 2009 at 8:28 pm
Jenny Liu BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
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stunning.

absolutely, stunning.

on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:33 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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that was really good i really like it you def have ur own style

on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:33 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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that was really good i really like it you def have ur own style

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Aug. 31 2009 at 12:51 pm
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

wow, this was really good. at first i just didnt expect it to be (you know how many depressed love poems are quite horribly written and cliche) but this was great. thanks for surpassing my expectations!